Title: Zagamo: The war within
Author: Ray Mawerera
Published in Harare
by Royalty Books, 2023,109 pages
Isbn:
987-11779330819
A book review by
Memory Chirere
Ray Mawerera
will surely be in deep trouble for his pacey debut novella, Zagamo: The War Within. Some stunned readers may constantly
turn over the book to look at the picture of the author himself with excitement and
return to the story. Yet, some other readers may really want to take out the sjambok
and ask why this writer plays hide and seek with them as if he pays them money!
About three full
times, you appear to control this story, as a reader, but it springs up and
races in all unusual directions. Yes, there is something weirdly called reader
control. It is a state in which a reader of a novel is aware of what may definitely
come next, and the reader feels like he also wrote the story himself. Ray Mawerera
does not allow you that.
In the Creative
Writing class, it is often said; suspense is
a valuable tool for keeping a reader’s attention and interest. Suspense
involves withholding information and raising key questions that pique readers’
curiosity. With suspense, you’re playing with your readers’ expectations of
time. They know information is coming, but they just don’t know when. Mawerera does that. He dribbles you and you fall then he asks you to stand up and come get the ball. He dribbles you with yet more suspense and an unpredictable plot.
That boy, Zagamo, just appears from nowhere.
From the beginning, the narrator does not know
that Zagamo is not the real name of his new school mate. He does not know that
soon, he will discover that he is related to Zagamo. He will always be crying
for Zagamo. It is the late 1970’s in the Salisbury township of Highfield and out
there, a bush war is raging between the Rhodesians and the guerrillas.
Unkwon to his new city classmates, Zagamo is
coming from the back of beyond, where he has seen his family slaughtered by the
Rhodesian military. He only survived because he had been sent to fetch sugar,
or is it salt, from the next hut.
A war is raging within Zagamo.
Although Zagamo is the fastest runner on the
school track, he is already dead. His nights are full of ghosts. He is not a
boy. He is not yet a man. Deep within he is searching for what he does not know
to be revenge. The arrest of his one and only surviving relative, an uncle,
becomes the straw that breaks the back of the camel…and that of big Zagamo.
One Friday after dinner when Zagamo and Uncle
Dobola had visited, Zagamo asked Father: “Baba, where were the African leaders
when the Europeans sat down to share African countries amongst themselves?”
The two elderly men looked at each other. Father
said, slowly, thoughtfully: “They were not invited. It was a meeting of
Europeans only. Why do you ask?”
“I thought maybe they did not know about this
meeting, or they did not have ships to go where the meeting was?” Zagamo says,
more to himself than the shocked audience. Why is this child speaking like an
oracle?
And one day… Zagamo disappears from home and
country!
You want him to return alive. But when he
returns, he tests your notion of justice to the limits. Ray Mawerera’s novel is
a testament that the literature about the Zimbabwe war of liberation continues
to grow in many clear directions and modes. There is the story written about
contact by combatants like Alexander Kanengoni and Thomas Bvuma. There is the
story about real contact told by non-combatants like Shimmer Chinodya. There is the story written about this war by former Rhodesian fighters like Angus Shaw and Jeremy Ford. Then
there is the story written about the activities in mobilising townships like
Highfield, by non-combatants like Stanley Nyamfukudza, Olley Maruma and now,
Ray Mawerera.
The strands keep growing, showing that war is a
complex thing even for those who are not at the front.
Edited by prolific novelist, Philliph
Chidavaenzi, Zagamo is an easy read. It will not harm you because you can read
through it during a road trip from Harare to Beitbridge.
However, get ready for the brutally twisting plot
which Mawerera has prepared for you. It appears to me that for Mawerera, the golden rule of crafting a story is that; no one and nothing is
quite as it seems.
I predict that you will read this story and either
hug Mawerera or seek his throat or both! It is thrilling to be thrilled.
Ray Mawerera is a veteran Zimbabwean journalist
and public relations expert based in Harare where he stays with his wife Caroline.
The couple has three adult children.
This is a great piece of work!!
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